User:Quovi/Mangrove crab/Such0051 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Drumm065, Saraberger, Caffeinatedmicrobe, and Quovi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Quovi/Mangrove_crab?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mangrove crab

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a very good start to the article. The lead looks pretty good. I would add something that indicates mangrove crabs' importance in biogeochemical cycles. Phylogeny section is incomplete. Distribution section looks great, just change the citations to Wikipedia format. Under ecological impacts, the biofilm and diet section look good. The habitat engineering and predation sections are incomplete. Under human impacts, climate change and land use change are incomplete, but the section on food looks very good. For the biogeochemical impacts section, I think that you may be able to incorporate that information within other sections. For example, if a part of their impact on the biogeochemistry is a result of burrowing, you could include that under habitat engineering. Other than that, I think the content provided is good, but a little more detail might be nice. Overall, this article is very good. Some sections have not been started yet. The tone is neutral, and the information is presented very clearly in an unbiased manner. The sources look good except for the few that are not linked in the distribution section. They are up to date and reliable. There were no grammatical issues or spelling issues. I think that you should try to include an image of a mangrove ecosystem and pictures of the crabs. I think that the information added definitely makes the article more complete. Good work!