User:QwerpQwertus/RfF


 * Good job, but I would recommend the following improvements... 
 * Adding Reliable References - References prove the notability, or importance of the subject, why it should be included in an encyclopedia. You :should add more from places that show this, such as a newspaper or bod website that is not theirs.
 * Adding Reliable Sources - Sources show where you got your info from and that it is reliable\accurate.
 * Inline Citations - Show where you got sections of information within the text - they are especially important for somewhat controversial topics.
 * Expanding It - The article is rather short and may need to be expanded.
 * Reformatting Coding - The coding is somewhat out of uniform and should be touched up.
 * Cleaning It Up - Improving the visual appeal of the article.
 * Adding Pictures - You can always use a good photo!
 * Adding An Infobox - Info-boxes are always good for an article - they help people see the most important info.
 * A Few External links - External Links allow the reader to study more about the subject.
 * Dividing The Summary Into More Sections - Maybe divide the text into a few sections (ex: Childhood, Career, Death)
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 * Good job though! If you have any questions or need help improving, or publishing it to Wikiepdia, feel free to contact me here or visit my page :here. I would also recommend possibly reading this. 
 * QwerpQwertus (talk) 03:21, 7 June 2010 (UTC)