User:Qwerty0/major edits

Edits that aren't minor corrections of mistakes or small additions of content.

These are things that aren't applicable to the milestones page (except Braid).

Progress
Finished going as far back as 10/26/10. Finished looking through personal editing milestones page for those applicable to this one.

Edits

 * Braid (video game) 6 November 2007
 * First major edit. Took an article from consisting of an intro and trivia section to having two genuine sections and an in-depth description.


 * Duke Ellington School 12 January 2010
 * Got advertisement tag removed. Someone had added a bunch of very proud and WP:UNENCYCLOPEDIC prose that got it tagged with the advert template. Article is rarely-edited so it'd stayed like that.


 * Duke Ellington School 12 February 2010
 * Added section on Relocation controversy


 * Point accepted mutation 26 October 2010
 * Aka PAM, as in "use PAM30 in the BLAST search parameters."


 * Gut-associated lymphoid tissue 20 November 2010
 * Tried to find basis for "The gut contains 70% of the body's immune system" but found none. Also, the statistic has spread everywhere (including lots of herbal remedy sites). So I found the best reference I could and used it to replace the statistic with a more general statement that the gut is "largest mass of lymphoid tissue in the body".


 * Sun acquisition by Oracle 6 March 2010
 * Rewrote most of it, restructured almost all of it. Article was an out of date, badly structured mess. It was full of random things jotted in there as they happened. And it had mostly stopped in March 2010, before the biggest, most concrete bad news that came out of the whole acquisition. I added and elaborated on the shutdown of OpenSolaris, the Java lawsuit over Android, and LibreOffice.


 * IronKey 28 November 2011


 * Columbus (Racioppi) 17 December 2011
 * First (real) new article! Part of SarahStierch's Fine art edit-a-thon at the MLK library.


 * Sexting 21 December 2011