User:R1h2017/sandbox

Article Evaluation
The article Luca Guadagnino seems to include all the important details of his life's work. For his early life and education, it is very concise yet covers what the reader needs to know. I did notice a few issues. The article does not include that Call Me By Your Name is a sequel. It also has an upcoming features section that is outdated. The article seems neutral, only mentioning Guadagnino's work and acknowledging when certain pieces of his work has been praised. One part of the article that is underrepresented in my opinion is his work on Call Me By Your Name, which he has received a lot of attention for. R1h2017 (talk) 22:30, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Potential Articles
Philology: I chose philology as one of my potential articles because the page itself is pretty short in terms of the content. I would like to make some changes in terms of the paragraphs that need deleting due to little to no relation to the topic. I would also like to work on making the introduction clearer for the reader with clearing unnecessary definitions.

Tonality: I would like to maybe focus on this article because on the talk page, authors said that it was "a complete mess!" This article is C-rated which is also good because that means there needs to be work done on it. It needs to mention there is no one definition of tonality. There are a lot of issues with certain users using terms to describe the topic in a light that is misleading. I would like to work on making the article clearer to follow, since it is rated Top Importance. R1h2017 (talk) 03:23, 19 February 2018 (UTC)

Chosen Article: Disney Revival
Since this article is a stub, I will be basically writing most of this. I chose this after reviewing different films and realizing that there is a page for the Disney Renaissance in the 90s but there is only a stub to document the Disney Revival which occurred in 2009. I will mostly attempt to just list the movies responsible for the revival and explain a little on it too.R1h2017 (talk) 01:27, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

= Disney Revival = The Disney Revival refers to the era beginning in 2006 when Walt Disney Company bought Pixar for $7.4 billion. Disney was no longer what it used to be during the Disney Renaissance, so it decided to rebrand itself as Walt Disney Animation Studios in order to meet audience's desires. Disney, which used to have studio executives, changed to director-led filmmaking instead since this worked well for Pixar.

Reception
Critical and public reaction

As seen here, these films were all well-received by the public. In the film critic site, Rotten Tomatoes, all five of the films had successful critical reception with Frozen having the highest of ratings from the Disney Revival films.

Awards
Both Tangled and Frozen have been nominated for Academy Award for Best Original Song, Frozen having won.

Marc's Peer Review
I think you have a very good idea in trying to add to the topic of Disney revival. However, I think you could do more to establish the direction of what you will discuss by incorporating more sources. Under the section "Disney Revival" I think it would be beneficial to specifically mention the status of Disney during the "Disney Renaissance" and discuss what happened in the time since. I think the reception section could be a very helpful tool in displaying statistics from the Disney Renaissance, however you will need to find sources that can give you exact figures. Overall, I think the idea is good and you have a good base of information to work with, just needs more elaboration and sources.

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