User:R72zzr/Green in Islam/Ekidd04 Peer Review

General info
R72zzr
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:R72zzr/Green_in_Islam?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green in Islam

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello, I think you've got a good starting point. First of all, I think it would help if you copied the sections of the article you worked on, and directly add what you're adding to the article. I think it'll be helpful for you to see it this way, and also it will probably lead to less work for you in the end. Also it's hard to critique what you've added if you can't see where it's being added. Another suggestion is that due to how short the article is, I would look into adding sections about the use of the color beyond the flags. For example, clothing, furniture, religious purposes, etc., and separate those sections out.

Good luck with the article,

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