User:R72zzr/Green in Islam/Raquelroro Peer Review

General info
R72zzr
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing- Editing User:R72zzr/Green in Islam - Wikipedia :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)- Green in Islam - Wikipedia:

Evaluate the drafted changes.
Lead: Lead has a small explanation that correlates with the original article. The information seems to be used in the purpose to add or elaborate the lead of the original article.

Content: Content correlates with the topic and also adds and clarifies what was previously stated on the original article.

Tone and Balance: Tonality and balance of information and structure is simple and flows into a correct pace. Article doesn't express any bias and stays unbiased- neutral to the term and also examples that are used.

Source and References: Sources and references work well together, they are organized and also properly constructed according to Wikipedia guidelines. From clicking on them and reading around sources seem to be diverse and also concentrate on the topic and topics that can help construct and support the main topic.

Organization: Article Draft is well organized and sectioned. Made it very easy to read and review content. Cited sources were also cleaned and link to the correct spot.

Images and Media: Not present. But images media can help share and explain article points further.

Overall Impressions: Article Draft is headed into the right direction, the used or content and organization really helps keep this draft organized. Looking forward to seeing the final changes to the original article.