User:RAT1981/The Butter Battle Book/Smitc284 Peer Review

I like the inspiration paragraph, I think that it greatly improved the article. I do think that a little background on who Dr. Suess is would benefit the article as well. I believe the content added was neutral and very relevant. Your lead includes information that is present in the article. The content you added is concise and easy to read. Great work!!!

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