User:RAlexis13/School discipline/Hgarth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RAlexis13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RAlexis13/School_discipline?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi all--this is a good start. You'll want to invest a lot of time in doing the research to fill all of these elements of the outline in as much as possible. I think the organization is fine, but dont limit yourself to these categories--expand beyond them if you can