User:RAlexis13/School discipline/Janice.christell Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RAlexis13, Altheadulany, Cwall114


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RAlexis13/School discipline


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I do not feel satisfied that I know the importance of the topic. An introduction regarding why art is important to the BLM movement would be nice.
 * You only talk about the disparities, which doesn't feel completely neutral. Consider including basic facts about what the school discipline is like.
 * I liked that you had a lead section that is easy to understand
 * I also liked that you included Reliable sources