User:RAlexis13/School discipline/MinaE123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RAlexis13, Altheadulany, Cwall114


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RAlexis13/School_discipline?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The case studies mentioned and the sections outlined (state-level and federal-level classroom disparities) seems to be great areas to look into for this topic. The outline seems solid! It is just a matter of writing out these ideas. Based on the outline alone, however, it is hard to get a sense of things like tone, organization, and content. One thing to watch out for as you are writing, is having balanced sections with sufficient examples and case studies to exemplify the topic you are tackling. This would require drawing information from multiple sources/case studies/incidents. Also, a question that I was wondering about is whether you will address school discipline and disparities in a few specific states or whether you are going to provide comprehensive statistics for each state. Also, as you are writing, make sure that you have a neutral tone which could be difficult because I imagine some statistics and disparities will be triggering. Lastly, I know this is only a draft and that you are still compiling sources, but make sure to cite correctly using the "cite" feature on the top panel and inputting the url or doi of the source which should then generate the correct citation.