User:REL9040/Aspergillus niger/Aetilghman Peer Review

General info

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your embedded links look good. They all work. The content so far is concise, relevant, and well-written. I would suggest elaborating on the last sentence in your article body section, specifically the effect of citric acid production and your bacteria's role in that production.

Additionally, I would add some information about its carbon, electron, and energy sources like we learned in class. Another suggestion would be to widen your scope of things your bacteria produces to briefly touch on more than just its citric acid production.

Your images look good. Overall, you are off to a good start to improving the article as a whole!