User:REL9040/Aspergillus niger/Haw11967 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

REL90404, Eecc27, Egross123, Nathalieslebreton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Aspergillus niger

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is well flowing into the information of the article.

Content: The taxonomy section could be expanded to be more descriptive. It is going in a good direction, and with the addition of some resources it can be elaborated more. The Pathogenicity section is really interesting to me. I love the idea of having a plant disease and human and animal disease section. An idea could be to shorten that header to Mammals instead of breaking it into humans and animals. This section is also short but has the potential to have an abundance of information. The cultivation section only has one sentence, but it can expand way beyond this. How is it cultivated, what is the process like, who does it? The industrial uses section is the biggest section and I believe is beneficial to the article. It provides a sense of how this is used in real life. The genetics section I think needs to be before industrial uses, having it towards the beginning could provide a better understanding before jumping into what it does in the world.

Images: I really like the images in this article. They are clear and interesting to look at.

References: There is a good amount of references in this article. They are citied well and seem to be organized in a good way.