User:REL9040/Aspergillus niger/Miyamoto4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

REL9040, Eecc27, Egross123, Nathalieslebreton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:REL9040/Aspergillus_niger?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aspergillus niger

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The sandbox looks as if it is compiling reliable sources to add new content into the main article which could use more information on genetics, morphology, physiology, history and distribution. The information written in the sandbox that’s intended for the article body appears to flesh out existing sections, especially Industrial Uses, which is a great start. However, new sections relating to the previously suggested information could enhance the educational potential of the article. The new sources provided in the bibliography look as if they are properly cited on the sentences that may be added to the article. Even though some of these sources date back to almost twenty years, they seem reliable and unbiased. Also, all links that were tested still work. Some more images could also be useful as reference in some sections, such as in Industrial Use and Genetics.