User:REL9040/Aspergillus niger/Seaoli12oceans12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

REL9040, Eecc27, Egross123, Nathalieslebreton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sandbox Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Article Link

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sandbox draft does not contain much information about the actual microbe, it mostly focuses on industrial uses.

The summary paragraph at the beginning of the article also focuses more on the disease caused by the microbe and contains little information about the microbe itself other than the fact that it is a fungus.

The taxonomy section is clear and contains a good amount of relevant information.

I would move the Pathogenicity, Cultivation, and Industrial Uses sections to the end of the article and move the Genetics information after the taxonomy section. This would allow for a better flow of the overall article and allow for pertinent information about the microbe itself to be seen first.

More information should be added about the microbe itself. This article focuses mainly on the disease and uses of the microbe rather than the microbiology of the microbe.