User:REMaccount-Mike/Pinecone Burke Provincial Park/Magan Dayal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

REMaccount-Mike

Antony Dayton

NicoLaw2

Damonr17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:REMaccount-Mike/Pinecone_Burke_Provincial_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pinecone Burke Provincial Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
When reading through each individual topic, everyone really excelled in sharing the broad topic which was strengthened though the supporting details. No one got carried away with their writing and the article was fairly easy to follow.

There’s a lot of resourceful information included most of which I had not been aware of before reading this article. I found the history aspect of Pinecone Burke Provincial Park compelling especially when learning what the land was used for in the past.

I didn’t see any information on any endangered species that may be residing at the park or of the population trends if those were available. I would also suggest including how climate change may have an ecological impact on the environment.

This was a very clear and precise read which made it easy for the reader to follow. Everyone did a great job at keeping all the topics at a neutral tone and not incorporating bias of any kind. The use of sources is also well done as many of the links cited are varied and there isn’t much repetition.

Overall, this was a great rough draft! I would just suggest incorporating some of those missing topics that I mentioned.