User:RIAwiki02/Race and health/Everlark13 Peer Review

General info
RIAwiki02
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:RIAwiki02/Race and health - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Race and health - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Your article provides facts in an unbiased manner and in your own words.
 * 2) I would suggest using different sources for 2 and 3 since the studies took place in New Zealand and Italy and this class focuses on racial disparities in the US. The first source is good.
 * 3) Try summarizing multiple articles in your own words before writing down the edits you want to make. I find that it makes it easier to not plagiarize and also provide a good summary of the topic. Also, it looks like you are adding on to the controversy section, but based on your information and sources, I think it would better fit in the Racial Health disparities section.