User:RJB379/Association football/ADeng102 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Intro sentence uses a vauge phrase "one of the first" implying the topic is suggestive and "many other tribes" at least one tribe should be named to get rid of any confusion other than that lead is well organized and conveys the point of the article well

content explains the changes of the sport like the goals height and location and talks about the current studies pertaining to the sport content is up to date easy to ready and provisdes addequate information

well organized has 3 references that are fairly reccent and is cited only at the end of paragraphs each block of information