User:RJasmine125/James Johnson/Jujuthebean Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RJasmine125


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RJasmine125/James_Johnson?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think it's a good start to an article. The reference was well cited but the quote was maybe a little too long. I think the article can be developed more and it would be good to see where this new addition will fit into the whole article.