User:RJasmine125/Sadie Redwing/Elizrm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) RJasmine125


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sandbox (but nothing written): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RJasmine125/Sadie_Redwing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Bibliography page (that has some written): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RJasmine125/Sadie_Redwing/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * None

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Since there is no pre-existing article about Sadie Redwing, the new content is limited but solid. All claims are backed up by multiple citations and it's written in a neutral tone of voice. The colleges she attended and where she teaches could be linked to their respective wiki pages. I could see additional content about Redwing's notable artwork.