User:RLW016/Jones Lake State Park/MamaUniversee Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? RLW016
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:RLW016/Jones Lake State Park

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes the links are relevant.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? The links were up to date
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? No
 * Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? No

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes the topics in the references that were added were really helpful and good updating the article with recent sources.
 * Are the sources current? Yes they are from recent websites.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? The Sources are from government websites so they are contributed by multiple authors. Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? No they don't.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? All links work

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? The links that are added definitely helpful.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Strong due
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * Content can be improved through Adding some of the information from your sources to the ecology section and geology section