User:RMWilkens/Ocean chemistry/Mullerybrux Peer Review

General info
RMWilkens
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:RMWilkens/Ocean chemistry
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Marine chemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think you are making good progress on this page and your additions are meaningful and helpful for the reader.

Lead
I agree with the deletion, but i would add the link to oceanography so that if the reader needs an explanation they can get one.

Organic compounds in the oceans
I know you havent added anything to this yet but the actual wiki page does seem to be lacking so I think this might be a good place to put most of your effort into because it is a large and important part of the chemistry of the ocean, as you probably know.

Chemical ecology of extremophiles
I like your additions to this section i think that your edits tie the topic back to chemistry which is the point of the page. One suggestion I have is maybe if you can find a page that explains electron acceptors etc. to link in that section i think that would help people not as well versed in chemistry grasp the idea, because for a not science person it might get confusing, but your page isnt the right place to explain how all that works. I do really like that you have examples in this section i think that helps the reader go into a deeper dive if thats what they choose.