User:RPIRED/One stop shop/Htetnaingoo9 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) RPIRED


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RPIRED/One_stop_shop?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * One stop shop

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I see that you developed a lot on this original article. I think that mentioning the background of this topic is really great for the audience.

Lead -

I think that your introductory sentence concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.

Content -

I think that your new adding contents are relevant to the topic. And I did not see any irrelevant content in your contribution.

Tone -

I think that your contribution to this article is not neutral, and I did not see any bias in your contribution.

Sources - All new sources and information are reliable for this topic.

Organization -

I think that your contribution is easy to read for the audience. I did not see any grammatical or spelling errors in your contribution. Your contribution is excellent flowed, and well organized.

Images -

I think that the new image enhances understanding of the topic.

Overall Impression -

Your contribution to this topic is really great, and you totally developed the article. I see that you put much effort into your contribution and research. Great job!