User:RPIRED/One stop shop/Jameson.dimaio Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RPIRED


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RPIRED/One_stop_shop?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * One stop shop

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think you did a great job transforming this article into a public administration focused piece that gives readers a good insight into how public services have been delivered in this manner. The description of the many different countries and how they have approached this concept gives a comprehensive description of how this concept is used in the real world. Combined with the many sources to do further research seems well thought out and the picture is a great addition as well. One change I could recommend would be to break the article up with new headings such weaknesses and then add a future heading covering how this could translate into the no stop system. Otherwise I think this was a great restructuring that gives the reader a very good understanding about one stop shops that is a huge improvement over the original article.