User:RPerry57/Isis hippuris/Abigra Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryan Perry and Paige Raisides


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Isis hippuris


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Isis hippuris

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the bit under "description" in which you describe 2 differing ridges is good content for your article, but is out of place in the descriptions section. It might be helpful to include this under your habitat/distribution section. (I moved this during my sandbox edit)

Additionally, for distribution and habitat, it be helpful to include more information regarding these environments. What temperatures are they/ what is the range of these temperatures? What kinds of sediments are present? Etc. Additionally, I'd personally be interested to see more in-depth descriptions of the phenotypic differences within the different habitat types.

You mention anti-cancer properties in your opening section, but I think it could be interesting to include more information on this. What are the properties of it that make it anti cancerous? How much research has been done on this.

Some other things to thing about might be natural predators/ other ecological relationships, non natural threats (is it affected by bottom trawling, is it particularly sensitive or resilient to temperature or pH changes etc), or conservation efforts.

Overall, I think this article is much more complete than the initial stub, but it seems as though there is a lot more room for elaboration on some of the points you made that would increase the readers understanding, and provide a more comprehensive understanding of the species. Great Job so far! :)