User:RPshiesty/Agriculture in India/Afernandes1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RPshiesty


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RPshiesty/Agriculture_in_India?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Agriculture in India

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Everything is relevant to the article topic. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes that were a bit distracting.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The writing is neutral and does not seem to be biased, however it might benefit the article to remove the quote and instead paraphrase the message of the source. It also might be helpful to include more peer reviewed academic or scientific sources seeing as how the content has to do with biological concepts.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * It might be worth it to bring in different aspects of organic farming under the ZBNF movement, such as the specific practices that it encourages.
 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * The citations work and support the article claim but could be more varied and increased in number.
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * The reference is reliable and comes from a neutral source.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?

It might be worth it to look into more recent sources on organic farming and recent zbnf movements, the ones I am aware of are in karnataka specifically.