User:RPshiesty/Agriculture in India/Destructionuser82 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RPShiesty


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RPshiesty/Agriculture_in_India?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Agriculture in India

Legend

plain text = Mainspace article text

boldface text = my additions

italized text = copyedited text from Mainspace

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content:

No issues here -

Tone and Balance:

The tone is pretty neutral so no issues there.

Overall impressions:

It's a good add - would advise you to implement more readability within it - because otherwise I am unsure whether the people will understand what "process" you are talking about - or the quoted lines below.

Organization:

This is pretty solid- no issues here

Sources and References:

Fix the reerences to use the right journal and the date - right now it shows up with red text