User:RR5786/Scientific writing/RoeJogan712 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Content

I think the content flows extremely well and I have no real notes. Well written, descriptive yet plain language to represent the sources.

Sources and References

The sources are clearly reliable and full of good information regarding the topic. However, you are missing one citation. It is marked with a [citation needed]

Organization

I think the information flows well. I would say I'm not too into the bullet points and that could flow better as just another sentance.