User:RYAN KISS/sandbox

New edits going in the Roger Adolph article:

Subheading: Contribution to society

1st edit: In 2008 Roger got together with a few colleagues and started the "Just Do It Sport Society" to promote healthy choices leadership and development. The decision to start the society was a result of the decline in sport activity for both aboriginal and non aboriginal youth over the past decade. ~

Subheading: Early Life

2nd edit: Roger was born son of Lawerence and Maggie Adolph who were both elders of the fountain band. Both of whom have first hand experience in the fountain area. ~

Subheading: Overall Career

3rd edit: Rogers official debut was 1967-02-27. For his career he went 10 bouts and 45 rounds in the featherweight division. ~


 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? Yes, everything in the article is relevant to Rogers boxing career, I was a little distracted at first when reading that he was playing basketball. As I continued reading I learned that a fight during basketball is actually what led him to get into boxing. ~
 * Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article? The links work, there was no close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article. Everything seemed to be summed up properly. ~
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? All the information is properly dated. When reading there was a portion that talked about racism against the native people and how it lead to to Roger quitting boxing short term. I felt this point could have been expanded upon. There seemed to be a lack of evidence showing exactly how the association was racist towards Roger. ~