User:RYNOT1206/Crisis management/JEOushak Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RYNOT1206


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RYNOT1206/Crisis management


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Crisis management

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content: Adds good context to the article that was missing. The article might benefit from referencing these changes in the lead section, as well.

Tone and Balance: Tone is balanced and neutral.

Sources and References: Sources all seem reputable and the addition is heavy on citations.

Organization: This could be improved possibly by making subheadings for individual country cases, though there would have to be a little more substance to justify a breakout like that. You touch very briefly on global coordination issues but this could be worth its own section as well and would add to the article.

overall Impressions: This is a really good addition; it could benefit the article even further if details on cases were a little more fleshed out and broken out.