User:Ra07847/Rodenticide/Chazzidy Harper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ra07847


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Rodenticide
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead doesn't reflect the new content added by Ra07847, while providing an introductory sentence that is concise it doesn't describe the articles topic. The content added by the user is relevant to the subtopic of Anticoagulants but not necessary up to date being synthesized from an article from 2001. Due to content only being synthesized by one source Pelfrene, Alain F. (2001), "Rodenticides", Handbook of Pesticide Toxicology, Elsevier, pp. 1793–1836 could make the information biased towards a particular position. The information provided is backed up by a government website, from the national pesticide information center, they cover the mechanism behind the clotting behavior. The content reflects what the source provides which is insight on secondary poisoning from prey, and also why rodents have to be handled. The one source provided isn't through due to being out of date not reflecting the plethora of the past 21 years of literature available on the topic. The content added is limited making the information concise and to the point but not clear containing grammatical errors. The content has added information that wasn't previously included in the article but the content can be improved by synthesizing more sources which will allow the user to add additional content to their start of providing evidence of secondary poisoning being caused by exposure to prey.