User:Rac150/Social stigma of obesity/Kgt11 Peer Review

I'm not sure if this is how I'm supposed to do the peer review, but your article looks great!

The only thing is two citations appear to have an issue with the date, and I would maybe say "terms considered unacceptable" instead of unaccepted because that word was rejected by spellcheck for me.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I'm not sure if this is how I'm supposed to do the peer review, but your article looks great!

The only thing is two citations appear to have an issue with the date, and I would maybe say "terms considered unacceptable" instead of unaccepted because that word was rejected by spellcheck for me.