User:RaccoonEnjoyer/Kylix/Wikieditor1685 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Raccoon Enjoyer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RaccoonEnjoyer/Kylix?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kylix
 * Kylix

Evaluate the drafted changes
-Great start!

-Lead section: come up with a title and make it your own a little bit more, alot of the content is extremely similar to the original (love your description of the tondo)

-Rearrange the images, they seem clumped at the bottom and I think the project would benefit from reformatting

-If possible, break up the Subtypes section a little, there is tons of valuable information that I believe could benefit from expansion in to smaller sections, a section per subtype?