User:Rachael.kateee/Ethinylestradiol/Daeshjeam Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rachael.kateee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ethinylestradiol


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethinylestradiol

Evaluate the drafted changes
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When it comes the Lead of the overall topic, the introductory is very clear and stated in the first few sentences starting with the definition. From this I can tell (even the reader if it is someone else) what Ethinylestradiol is and what it is commonly used for. For example, for the average person reading this, the first sentence itself explains what it is used for and we know that this is for birth control. It then goes into other facts like side effects and how it leaves the body after use. So in all, the Lead has a very strong introductory sentence. As far as anything missing, I feel like some information on how this medication is used now days should be very present. This should also be relevant I feel because in today's time, birth control, abortion and women's rights all have ties to what this medication can do and the controversy behind it. I just feel a little more about this medication should have been updated on how we use it now and not just when it first was introduced in the twentieth century. The content added definitely persuades the reader (even myself) to stay engaged and learn more about this medication.