User:Rachael.kateee/Ethinylestradiol/HL02378 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rachael.kateee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rachael.kateee/Ethinylestradiol?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethinylestradiol

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article apparently did not need much changes to be made, as it already has a lot of content available. The lead is concise, but could be trimmed down a bit, if necessary, as there is a little too much detail on the lead. Maybe remove a sentence or two that gets a little too much in detail. Content added it relevant to the topic and deals with at least one of Wiki's equity gaps. Content is neutral with little to no bias. Views are represented fine, but overdose could use some more information. No images added by Rachael, as the article already has images that are relevant. Content added is a little too concise and could use some more information. No grammar or spelling errors from the content added. I guess it is well organized. New content could use a reference or two. Sources seem up to date and working properly. Most are from secondary literature. Not really much complaints on the sources. In summary, more information on overdose, maybe trim the lead a bit, and add a reference or two to that section and I believe you should be fine for your contributions on the article.