User:RachelKWalsh/Ancient Greek religion/Camsara99 Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) RachelKWalsh's Ancient Greek Religion page
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:RachelKWalsh/Sandbox2

Content

 * The content is all relevent and interesting
 * The content stays neutral
 * This is a very important topic to be added to the page - good choice!
 * The sentance on the requirements of the oracle of Delphi doesn't make much sense, maybe re-word it to be more clear about your meaning?

Structure

 * The section really needs a revision for sentance structure.
 * There is a lot of long sentances with many commas. On wikipedia shorter sentances with periods as opposed to multiple commas work better.
 * There are a few spelling errors and typos
 * There are a few instances where it seems like two sentances were combined but not properly edited together
 * The Greek words should be italicized
 * Greek or Greeks should always be capitalized.

Sources and References

 * The sources seem reliable by title, but only the link to the third one works. Make sure you aren't linking to pages only accesible via a library account!

Organization

 * The content is presented in an order that makes perfect sense - very well done!

Overall impressions

 * Overall the section is full of good information, and just needs a quick edit to flow much better
 * Revisit the sources and find working links for them if possible
 * You seem to have done a great job of getting information from your sources, maybe add a few sentances to other sections as well if you have the info.