User:Rachel Clemens/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title Communication design
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has a notice on the top saying it needs to be improved, with more citations and, edited for clarity. There is some recent talk on about making the article more concise. Over all the article is missing a lot of information and does not go deep into what communications design is. There is lots of room for improvement, including information about what communication design is, how to do it and, where it is used.
 * Sources
 * Lee, William C. Y. Mobile Communications Design Fundamentals. 2nd ed., Wiley, 1993.
 * Barbour, Joshua B., et al. “Organizational Communication Design Logics: A Theory of Communicative Intervention and Collective Communication Design.” Communication Theory, vol. 28, no. 3, Wiley Subscription Services, Inc, 2018, pp. 332–53, https://doi.org/10.1093/ct/qtx005.
 * Hong, JungHwa (Jenny), and Kyung-Ah (Kay) Byun. “Communicating Design Innovativeness: The Role of Design Information Presentation on Attitudes Depending on Different Thinking Styles.” Journal of Marketing Communications, vol. 26, no. 4, Routledge, 2020, pp. 394–413, https://doi.org/10.1080/13527266.2018.1511627.
 * Barbour, Joshua B., et al. “Organizational Communication Design Logics: A Theory of Communicative Intervention and Collective Communication Design.” Communication Theory, vol. 28, no. 3, Wiley Subscription Services, Inc, 2018, pp. 332–53, https://doi.org/10.1093/ct/qtx005.
 * Hong, JungHwa (Jenny), and Kyung-Ah (Kay) Byun. “Communicating Design Innovativeness: The Role of Design Information Presentation on Attitudes Depending on Different Thinking Styles.” Journal of Marketing Communications, vol. 26, no. 4, Routledge, 2020, pp. 394–413, https://doi.org/10.1080/13527266.2018.1511627.

Option 2

 * Article title Demographic targeting
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has a notice on the top saying it needs to be improved with more citations and needs to include different points of view. This article is a part of a media project for Wikipedia. There is no talk on the talk page. The deffiniton of demographic targeting can be expanded on and worded better. There could be a section on uses of demographic targeting and, a section on how to select demographic targeting. Each current section could use more information and sources. Pictures could be added to help the reader better understand the article.
 * The article has a notice on the top saying it needs to be improved with more citations and needs to include different points of view. This article is a part of a media project for Wikipedia. There is no talk on the talk page. The deffiniton of demographic targeting can be expanded on and worded better. There could be a section on uses of demographic targeting and, a section on how to select demographic targeting. Each current section could use more information and sources. Pictures could be added to help the reader better understand the article.


 * Sources
 * Pooler, James A. Demographic Targeting : the Essential Role of Population Groups in Retail Marketing. First edition., Taylor and Francis, 2017.
 * Richardson, Janice, et al. Big Data, Political Campaigning and the Law Democracy and Privacy in the Age of Micro-Targeting. Routledge, 2019.
 * Harrison, Neil, and Sue Hatt. “Disadvantaged Learners: Who Are We Targeting?; Understanding the Targeting of Widening Participation Activity in the United Kingdom Using Geo-Demographic Data from Southwest England.” Higher Education Quarterly, vol. 64, no. 1, Blackwell Publishing Ltd, 2010, pp. 65–88, https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1468-2273.2009.00431.x.

Option 3

 * Article title Mass collaboration
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has a notice on the top saying it needs to be improved and that it possibly contains original research. There are only five sources for this article, for the length of the current article there should be more. This article is a part of two Wikipedia projects, internet and organizations. There is no recent talk on the talk page about improving the article, the last talk on the page was in 2018. Each section could be improved by going further into detail and, add more sources for each section.
 * The article has a notice on the top saying it needs to be improved and that it possibly contains original research. There are only five sources for this article, for the length of the current article there should be more. This article is a part of two Wikipedia projects, internet and organizations. There is no recent talk on the talk page about improving the article, the last talk on the page was in 2018. Each section could be improved by going further into detail and, add more sources for each section.


 * Sources
 * Ball, Zachary, and Kemper Lewis. “Observing Network Characteristics in Mass Collaboration Design Projects.” Design Science, vol. 4, 2018, https://doi.org/10.1017/dsj.2017.26.
 * Bauer, Matthias. “Campaign-Triggered Mass Collaboration in the Eu’s Online Consultations: The Isds-in-Ttip Case.” European View, vol. 14, no. 1, SAGE Publications, 2015, pp. 121–29, https://doi.org/10.1007/s12290-015-0346-6.

Option 4

 * Article title Television addiction
 * Article Evaluation
 * There is no recent talk on the talk page or recent suggestions for the article. However, the article has barley any information on it and only has five sources. To improve the article more research should be done and each point should be expanded on. Sections can also be added about, how television addiction occurs, how it can be treated and, what the effects are.
 * There is no recent talk on the talk page or recent suggestions for the article. However, the article has barley any information on it and only has five sources. To improve the article more research should be done and each point should be expanded on. Sections can also be added about, how television addiction occurs, how it can be treated and, what the effects are.


 * Sources
 * Sussman, Steve, and Meghan B. Moran. “Hidden Addiction: Television.” Journal of Behavioral Addictions, vol. 2, no. 3, Akadémiai Kiadó, 2013, pp. 125–32, https://doi.org/10.1556/JBA.2.2013.008.
 * Horvath, Cary W. “Measuring Television Addiction.” Journal of Broadcasting & Electronic Media, vol. 48, no. 3, Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, Inc, 2004, pp. 378–98, https://doi.org/10.1207/s15506878jobem4803_3.
 * Ali ULUSOY, and Vahit İLHAN. “TELEVISION ADDICTION AND AUDIENCE: IS IT POSSIBLE NOT TO WATCH TV?” Journal of Academic Social Science Studies, vol. 6, no. 20, Fırat University, 2019, pp. 1127–54, https://doi.org/10.9761/JASSS1443.

Option 5

 * Article title Experimental drug
 * Article Evaluation
 * There is no recent talk on the talk page or recent suggestions for the article. However, the article is a part of the Wikipedia project for pharmacology. The article is very short and does not have many sources. To improve the article there would need to be more sources and sections added to it. Possible sections include: past experimental dugs, case studies, knowledge behind trying an experimental drug and, current experimental drugs.
 * There is no recent talk on the talk page or recent suggestions for the article. However, the article is a part of the Wikipedia project for pharmacology. The article is very short and does not have many sources. To improve the article there would need to be more sources and sections added to it. Possible sections include: past experimental dugs, case studies, knowledge behind trying an experimental drug and, current experimental drugs.


 * Sources
 * Greenberg, Michael D. AIDS, Experimental Drug Approval, and the FDA New Drug Screening Process : a Legal Research Guide. William S. Hein & Co., 1999.
 * Mahant, Vijay. “‘Right-to-Try’ Experimental Drugs: An Overview.” Journal of Translational Medicine, vol. 18, no. 1, BioMed Central Ltd, 2020, pp. 253–253, https://doi.org/10.1186/s12967-020-02427-4.
 * Madeddu, Clelia, et al. “Experimental Drugs for Chemotherapy- and Cancer-Related Anemia.” Journal of Experimental Pharmacology, vol. 13, Dove Medical Press Limited, 2021, pp. 593–611, https://doi.org/10.2147/JEP.S262349.