User:Rachelbaer/Intracellular parasite/Lewis.tristen Peer Review

General info
Rachelbaer
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rachelbaer/Intracellular parasite
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Intracellular parasite

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the user's contributions to the article are creative, well-written and relate very well back to the topic of the article as a whole. I applaud the user's addition of "exceptions" to the general types of intercellular parasites along side the most common categories of parasites to give the article a broader range of information.

Though the current information provided is very beneficial to the article's purpose, I would suggest to the user to add more information regarding the addition of the parasite "lLeishmania amazonensis," as this seems like an addition to the article that could be further explored.

Additionally, I suggest that the user research information that could be added to the "susceptibility" portion of this article, as there is currently very little information regarding this section.

The list of references used by the user in his/her creation of this contributions is impressive and very well formatted.