User:Rachelkr24/Anoxygenic photosynthesis/Pjaml Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Rachelkr24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rachelkr24/Anoxygenic photosynthesis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anoxygenic photosynthesis
 * Anoxygenic photosynthesis

Evaluate the drafted changes
I realize you haven't posted anything on your Sandbox draft yet, but I saw that you've found a source in your bibliography. I decided to peer review your article because I thought your Wikipedia article choice was a good one; it seems like there's a lot you could do to improve on it. One thing completely missing from the article is the evolutionary history of anoxygenic photosynthesis, and based on the paper you have in your bibliography, I'd imagine you noticed that too and plan on contributing a section about that for this assignment.