User:Rachelkr24/Anoxygenic photosynthesis/Weile112 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rachelkr24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Anoxygenic photosynthesis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
All of the content on the page right now is great. It is relevant and neutral information that is well cited. The organization of the current article is great and seems to have the appropriate outline. There could be more elaboration and detail in all of the sections though. The information in the reaction center section is the most complete though. It would be helpful to have an image of some kind to portray the overall process and cellular machinery. This will help a wider range of readers understand the information.

More sources need to be used since there are only 3. The article has good imbedded links to other Wiki pages. I could not find the working draft so I cannot really compare the two.