User:Rachelscarseth/Woman Hater/Kuklo018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rachelscarseth, Levi.roske, Kyliemackedanz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rachelscarseth/Woman_Hater?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The wording of the first sentence is a little off. You could try something like "The term woman hater refers to somebody who is a misogynist". Since you link to the Wikipedia article for misogynist, I don't think it is necessary to define the term misogynist. You could link the Wikipedia article for Sexism the first time it is mentioned. There is an open parentheses missing in front of Joseph Swetnam. I think the gender roles section could be expanded upon if you need to add more to the article.

Overall, very good wording and you have good substance in this article.