User:RadRemi/Drag Queen Story Hour/DiaEdie Peer Review

Peer review Diana
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? RadiRemi
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Drag Queen Story Hour

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes I think so they jumped into the topic with some background history around the subject.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes it does and has a description as well.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes but I would of like to seen more articles on drag queens to show how this came about.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Not sure
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It is concise and straight to the point.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes and it is cited.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yup only a couple of years old. It is still current information because Drag Queen Story Hour is being performed in different States.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? n/a

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes they talk about the topic at hand.
 * Are the sources current? yes current to this date
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yup they work

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? no
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes each section is broken down including the history of Drag Queen Hour.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media No and they should of but it is hard when everything is copy righted


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?