User:Rae.hundley/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Debra Sparrow

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Since our goal for the semester is to expand public resources on Indigenous Oklahoman history, I chose an Indigenous artist, who specializes in preserving and maintaining the artistic practices of her predecessors.

Evaluate the article
-The article lacks crucial information, such as her birthdate and her place of origin, making it difficult to understand where and when Sparrow was creating art

-The article does not include any pictures of Sparrow or her pieces

-There is not much mentioned in the talk page regarding any of the previously mentioned notes

-Overall, the article is an okay start, but much can be expanded on such as how long she has been making art, more regarding her history as an artist, photographs of her art, and more about her personal life to fully understand what kind of art she does, and who she is as a person.