User:RaeMer/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Kingston City Library

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose it because it was about a building that sort of interested me. My first impression of the that it was a short article and it could use some more details and images.

Lead Section

 * Yes, the Kingston City Library in Kingston, NY.
 * It only has two sections: building and history. Yes, it briefly talks about them.
 * No, it doesn't.
 * It's concise and to the point.

Content

 * What little is written, seems relevant.
 * The most recent article was from 2011, so not super up-to-date.
 * In the building section it doesn't talk about the inspirations of the building, who designed it, or what the floor plan is like. Those could be added in this section.
 * No equity gaps and no misrepresentation.

Tone and Balance

 * It's neutral.
 * No biases.
 * No misrepresentations.
 * No viewpoints undescribed.
 * No persuasion.

Sources and References

 * Everything is backed up by another source.
 * One of the sources is available literature.
 * Most current is 2011.
 * Half are from the same person and the other half are all different authors.
 * Yes, there is always other information available.
 * Half of the sources used no longer can be found/the page no longer exists.

Organization and Writing Quality

 * It's clear, concise, and easy to read.
 * No grammar errors I could see.
 * It's well organized by topic. It could use some paragraph restructuring though.

Images and Media

 * N/A
 * N/A
 * N/A
 * N/A

Talk Page Discussion

 * N/A
 * It's rated Class-C and apart of 4 WikiProjects.
 * N/A

Overall Impressions

 * Class-C? The article could use some work in all aspects, some needing more work than others.
 * The strength is it's well organized.
 * The article could use more information about the building as a whole. The possible inspirations, any historical events that took place there, anything new since 2011 (when it was last touched), and maybe some more pictures.
 * The article is underdeveloped, it could use quite a bit more information.