User:Raelanes/Esplanade Avenue/Cerealmcmilk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Raelanes


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Raelanes/Esplanade Avenue


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Esplanade Avenue, New Orleans

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead to this article provides more information in contrast to the original report given of this street. However, the data provided and what is given additionally is not too much and serves as a great general overview of the street. You should definitely consider providing brief descriptions in your lead of information on the content in this article. The subtopics information is written fairly well, but the section on history is currently below geography as far as organization. I would put the history first as it flows better with the article overall and gives the reader a great look into the street's history before getting into the make and directions. The neighborhood section could definitely have more information incorporated into it. May I offer charts and statistics on activity in the neighborhood as a suitable suggestion? The sources are credible, and the links I have tried worked. Overall this article is headed in a good direction. Not very informative but informative enough considering the topics being talked about. Please consider my suggestions and keep up the amazing work!