User:Rafahorle/Third Woman Press/Stellaeve1515 Peer Review

Hi Rafa, this seems to me like you have done a really good job thus far. In regards to your lead, your opening sentence was enticing and specific. I could easily expect what your page will entail. Until I went to the sandbox I was slightly confused as to what you would be talking about in regards to the TWP besides its history, but once I went to your sandbox I was able to see the outline of what you intend to publish.

From what I could tell, your sources seem reliable and all of the links worked for me on my end. In addition, the work you have done thus far is neutral since you are mainly speaking of the TWP’s history as a paper.

I’d say that the biggest takeaway from me is that everything you have as of right now is great. TWP seems like such an interesting and necessary paper, so I think the audience would love to see a section with the most popular pieces of work. This would supplement your writing on the history on the TWP’s mission and can also give your page primary sources. Also, I think an image of Norma and an image if maybe the TWP had a logo would be a good thing to include here. Awesome job!

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