User:RagingWaterspout05/Deimos (deity)/Macaroni n cheese Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RagingWaterspout05


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RagingWaterspout05/Deimos (deity)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Deimos (deity)
 * Deimos (deity)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The current article already has a good leading section to explain what we're talking about. It doesn't have a lot of content, which I'm sure the user will be filling in. Maybe they could add more details into who deimos is and the myths surrounding it. It looks like in the user's draft they're going to be adding references in pop culture which is a good addition. Another thing I would suggest doing is adding more pictures.