User:Rahebradfar/New Public Management/RYNOT1206 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rahebradfar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rahebradfar/New_Public_Management?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * New Public Management
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * New Public Management
 * New Public Management

Evaluate the drafted changes
== I think the lead is good. I think the content fit what you are adding to. I did notice that the one source is from 2002. I'm sure you have more recent sources, but I thought it was worth mentioning. I think it sounds very neutral. It's very easy to read and not too dense. Though, I would suggest breaking up the second section into smaller paragraphs if possible. Overall, I think it's good. ==