User:Rahnnavy/Smeaton's Tower/Ahmaad.Ansarii Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Rahnnavy
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Smeaton's Tower
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In this article, a good balance has been struck between providing a comprehensive history of Smeaton's Tower, its background, its construction and its use as a lighthouse and memorial, as well as giving a detailed description of how it was built. There is a great deal of information and clarity in Smeaton's descriptions of how hydraulic lime was designed and used in his designs.

It may be useful to add more images or diagrams so that readers can get a better understanding of the different stages that take place during the construction and design of the tower. It would make the article more visually appealing and would make it easier for readers to understand the engineering behind the tower. Furthermore, including more information about Smeaton's other achievements and contribution to civil engineering would provide context as to why the tower is considered to be one of his greatest achievements.

In order to improve the article, the author should try to include a greater number of primary sources or references to back up the information provided in the article. The reader will be provided with additional resources for further research when reading this article, which will add credibility and depth to the article.

As I was reading the article, I noticed that it included a clearly chronological timeline of events related to the tower's history, which might be helpful for my own article. I could use this structure to organize the historical information in my own article in a clear and easy-to-follow manner.