User:Rai6827/Sanduk Ruit/Thor2022 Peer Review

General info


 * Whose work are you reviewing?

username is Rai6827

Link to draft you're reviewing


 * here is the link to the draft


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exist
 * this is the link to the original article

Evaluate the drafted changes
lead

I really love the article you have chosen. You have researched a lot about the doctor sanduk ruit. Yes, the lead has the information that has been updated. lead contain the major information that is need to the article.

content

Some of the information has been updated. If you can add more information, it will be great.

sources and references

other thing is that the sources and references are missing. add more reliable sources and cite them.

images and media

You could have add a picture of him, so that your peer will know him better. there are plenty of picture in the internet.