User:RaichelleA/Trilbyana/Margaret UW-Madison Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RaichelleA


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RaichelleA/Trilbyana


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Trilbyana

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am impressed by your overall knowledge of this subject and your ability to make it tangible to a novice reader like myself who doesn't know anything about Trilby. Your narrative is fluid and well-balanced with appropriate content and relevant examples.

If you were interested in making revisions, perhaps consider adding links to the key words throughout the articles (similar to what is done in the first paragraph). This would be an improvement because it may provide depth, context and supplemental details for terms such as:

Harper's Weekly

hypnotism

Harper & Bros.

cross dressing

Wichita Daily Eagle

Double check the word choice: Trilby also practices cross dressing thought the novel.

Overall, nice work on an interesting topic!